Focus group feedback

Final piece evaluation

The technical features we used contained the
The original intentions of the production was similar to the final product but the only problem we had was with the quality of shots as the lighting wasn't the best.

However it did do its job in terms on providing an insight on the book to the audience, the engages the audience through the suspense of the books content via how it was being introduced.

The focus group feedback gave me A lot of good criticism, the main thing said was the transition between each shot wasn't smooth enough, this was because of the quality of the production, we only had one camera therefore we had to move it according each time we had to use a close up. However with that being said we still need to edit our production therefore doing so will enable it to be more smooth.

The technical features such as lighting was mere at a pass this was because the location we filmed at did not have enough lighting and our equipment did not provide us with the substantial amount of lighting required therefore we plan to change this by adding filters when editing.

Aside from the criticism we had many positive comments stating the fact that we portrayed the book review show as something that would be seen professionally on a Saturday morning tv show.

As for the lighting we didn't have any equipment so we had to use natural light, the footage turned out to be quite yellow. The camera shots were on point, we showed many different angles but we did not include a extreme close up of the book, however we substituted this with a online image.

SCRIPT

This is the script i will be using for my book review show:

Host: Welcome to the Saturday morning 4-chan book club, todays book has sold over 3million copies worldwide in only a few months, Kafka on shore by Haruki murakami, its a comtempery fiction novel about a boy who runs away from home at the age of 15, it is written in two first person characters taking their personality and atmosphere. 

 I'm joined today by a special guest,Murakami herself, let me congratulate you on your success,  perhaps could give us an insight on what passes for the plot 

Marcelo: thank you, as for the plot it it follows two protagonists, kafka and nakata who are both share the same fate, both going about their daily routines 

Host: As for the chapters it jumps into different times and places could you tell us why you decided to do things this way

Marcelo: i wanted the book to have its relation to the spiritual world itself being having the audience solve the puzzle and fit pieces together, it seemed a little messy at first but i decided to go with it as the structure soldidates itself during the middle and towards the end.

Host: Why did you choose the lost forrest as the main stage for your story?

Marcelo: the idea of it being a forrest allows me to picture what exactly will be going on, it gives the the idea of trancending to another realm. for example the part where kafka goes to the underworld

I completely agree, what about the characters, i espically intruguied by Kafkas backstory, what gave you the inspiration for each of the different unique characters?

Funny thing is all of the characters were part of my draft expect for Kafka which i came up last with, i starting building a foundation of it and ever since he became the main protagonist.

HOST Some in the entertainment industry wants to use your book and turn it into a movie, what are your thoughts on this?

I have no problems against it, in fact its a fantastic idea, with it being a film i want it to be soley reflected as a film and be its own distinct thing. As for the characters i would want to use with probably be Dylan minnitee from goosebumps.